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I love it!
Feb 24 2010, 1:57 AM ESTI made some cuts in the first section, which you can see by checking the document history of this page. I'm also a little bit unclear about the meaning of "relational process," a term which you use a lot in that first section. Later sections help clarify it somewhat, but I think it might be helpful to choose some different words.
Beyond that, I love this, and I love that you wrote it. It's tight, it's clear, it takes an unambiguous stance, and I think it will be very helpful in grounding the conversations for this project.
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